考研英语作文
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AI智能生成
随着社会的发展,科技的进步,人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。如今,智能手机、互联网、人工智能等高科技产品已经深入到我们生活的方方面面,给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。然而,这些科技产品的普及也带来了一系列问题,如沉迷网络、隐私泄露、人际关系疏远等。因此,我们应该正确对待和使用科技产品,让它们为我们的生活服务,而不是成为我们生活的主宰。
作者其他创作
大纲/内容
评分标准
五档
胡说八道/走题
说人话
说漂亮话
说有设计的话
评价目标
语言
语法
词汇拼写
标点
用词恰当
文体格式
正式表达
非正式表达
文章结构
不走题方法
以人为本
三个关系的发展
人自身发展 60%
人与家人、他人、社会的发展 60%
人与自然的发展 30%
命题启示
大作文
次热点为主,最热点为辅
实际上和热点没啥关系
小作文
基本上出以前考过的类型
对策
充分重视历年写作真题
社会热点
两代关系
1992 父母与子女间更好的沟通
2005 养老足球赛
2014 相携
2016 与其只提要求,不如做个榜样
爱心问题
1995 希望工程
2001 爱心是一盏灯
2006 (小)给希望工程捐款
2019 答复信"援助乡村小学"
健康问题
1996 健康
1997 吸烟
2021 某城市居民体育锻炼方式调查
经济问题
2010 手机入网
2011 国内轿车时长部分品牌市场份额
2014 城乡人口变化
2015 中国某市居民春节假期花销比例
2018 消费者选择餐厅时的关注因素
旅游
2005 十一黄金周
2016 大学生旅游目的调查
2017 博物馆数量以及参观人数
环境保护
1991 "住在哪里—城市还是乡村"
1999 美国人口增长导致野生动物减少
2000 世界商务捕鱼简史
2009 (小)限制使用塑料袋
2011 旅程之'余'
教育问题
传统文化
2002 文化—民族与世界
2010 文化'火锅'
流行文化
1993 电视广告
2006 偶像崇拜
2009 网络的近与远
2009 MBA手机短信
2015 手机时代的聚会
2020 手机阅读
教育
2005 工程硕士招生
2008 成人高考
人生哲理(最多)
友谊
温室花朵经不起风雨
终点又是起点
自信
合作
乐观与悲观
选择
有书与读书
选课进行时
途中
习惯
兴趣
关注次热点以及最热门话题(小概率)
扎实提高语言能力,按自己目标分数规划
学习方法
第一步:总结框架,能憋废话
第二部:跟老师网课学习,积累个人素材库
第三步:多写,输出是最关键的
写作方法
小作文 10分/15min
(信件作文)
(信件作文)
信件
称呼 Salutation
Mr. 先生
Dr./Prof (博士/教授)
Ms. 用于女性
Editor 编辑
Dear Sir or Madam, 用于不知性别
To Whom It May Concern
(一般仅用于推荐信、证明信、鉴定信)
(一般仅用于推荐信、证明信、鉴定信)
正文 Body
首段
自我介绍
I am a staff member from your company.
I am a graduate from the Department of xx
I am a staff member from your company.
I am a graduate from the Department of xx
写作目的【改写提纲】
I am writing the letter in purpose of placing an order of some books
I am writing the letter in purpose of placing an order of some books
第二段
改写提纲二
分论点一
分论点二
尾段
表示感谢
Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you
Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you
期待回信
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
结束语
Yours sincerely
签名 Signature
根据大纲、题目要求写签名
一定不要写自己真实姓名
一定不要写自己真实姓名
真题解析
2006 (一)请求类
题目
分析
2010 (二)建议类
题目
2011 (一)建议类
题目
2012 (一) 建议类
题目
2012(二)投诉类
题目
分析
2013 (一) 邀请类
题目
2016(一)答复类
题目
告示
标题
Notice 通知、Announcement 通告
Removal、Acknowledgements(鸣谢)、
Corrections 更正、Invitation for Bids 招标
Corrections 更正、Invitation for Bids 招标
Note 、Preface序言 、Pact 公约、Rules
名词+过去分词
Child Lost
Child Lost
现在分词+名词
Looking for a Spouse
Looking for a Spouse
介词结构
For an Exchange of Jobs
For an Exchange of Jobs
日期
标题下一行右侧,右端与右边线对其
January 4, 2015
January 4, 2015
正文
时态使用
近期即将发生 is doing; to be held; will do
近期即将发生 is doing; to be held; will do
句型
Your attention, please ...
It has been decided that ...
署名
署名中实词部分大写
真题解析
2010 (一)
题目
分析
报告
备忘录
写作格式
齐头式
缩进式【建议】
大作文 20/35min
(图画作文)
(图画作文)
九宫格
三段法
第一段
图画描述
图画描述
[话题引起]
通用类:There is a growing national awareness of (-)/ agreement on ...
社会热点类: Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon that …
哲理类:People often say, " Xxx ." (Xxx 为谚语)
通用类:There is a growing national awareness of (-)/ agreement on ...
社会热点类: Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon that …
哲理类:People often say, " Xxx ." (Xxx 为谚语)
[概述] 第一句话
As is symbolically/vivdlly illustrated/demostrated in the portrayal/catoon, ...
As is symbolically/vivdlly illustrated/demostrated in the portrayal/catoon, ...
[细节补充] 高级句式描述
(倒装) 地点 + 动作 + 人物/角色,doing and doing, with + 环境细节
[两幅图]
通用:Meanwhile;相同:Similarly;相反:On the contrary
(倒装) 地点 + 动作 + 人物/角色,doing and doing, with + 环境细节
[两幅图]
通用:Meanwhile;相同:Similarly;相反:On the contrary
[额外:文字描述]
[会翻译文字内容] 方位,there is a caption/subtitle, which says/shows: " ."
[不会翻译文字] 方位,we are informed by the caption that ...
[会翻译文字内容] 方位,there is a caption/subtitle, which says/shows: " ."
[不会翻译文字] 方位,we are informed by the caption that ...
第二段
举例调查 (+)
在我所听到的,看到的,经历过的所有与这个话题相关的例子中,最令人印象深刻的是…
Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed,
experienced, the most impressive one is …(例子名字).
Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed,
experienced, the most impressive one is …(例子名字).
某人, 因在…方面的成功而著名,经常被人们记住她的…, 这在其一生都散发着光辉。
______________( 人 名 ) , honored for his/ her success in _____________, is always
remembered for his/ her ____________, which shines through every chapter/page of
his/her life.
______________( 人 名 ) , honored for his/ her success in _____________, is always
remembered for his/ her ____________, which shines through every chapter/page of
his/her life.
根据最近一个权威机构的调查表明, ...
According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, ...
almost …% of the people might hold the same view.
almost …% of the people might hold the same view that ...
almost …% of the people might do similarly in the same situation.
almost …% of the people might do sth..
According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, ...
almost …% of the people might hold the same view.
almost …% of the people might hold the same view that ...
almost …% of the people might do similarly in the same situation.
almost …% of the people might do sth..
要不是某事或某种精神,某些人又怎么可能实现最终的目标呢?
Without something / this spirit, how could it be possible for somebody to
achieve the ultimate goal?
Without something / this spirit, how could it be possible for somebody to
achieve the ultimate goal?
原因后果 (-)
③ 考虑到这个问题的重要性(或严重性),有必要指出其背后的原因。
Considering the significance(+) /seriousness (-) / popularity of the present situation,
we ought to point out the causes behind it.
(社会事件类) 在图画背后或者隐藏于 "具体内容" 显而易见:xxx
What lies behind the picture, or "buried" in the xxx , is clear:
Considering the significance(+) /seriousness (-) / popularity of the present situation,
we ought to point out the causes behind it.
(社会事件类) 在图画背后或者隐藏于 "具体内容" 显而易见:xxx
What lies behind the picture, or "buried" in the xxx , is clear:
① To begin with, ... might exert great influence on it.
② Firstly, ... might cause the problem. Secondly,... . The last but not least , ..
③ Primarily, the reason for (主题) is that(原因)
② Firstly, ... might cause the problem. Secondly,... . The last but not least , ..
③ Primarily, the reason for (主题) is that(原因)
```
【万能理由】Ø 关于… 法律法规的执行可能…
Enforcement of laws and regulations about …(主题词) might be …
【适用】正面话题:effective and efficient
有效和高效的负面话题:ineffective and inefficient
无效和低效的
【词汇】执行:法律法规:
Ø 社会缺少关注导致…A lack of attention (paid to …) leads to …
【词汇】缺少:导致:
Ø 个人没有…的意识导致… A lack of the consciousness of … results in …
【词汇】
意识:Ø 媒体:广告宣传负面:The mass media might inappropriately
or irrationally advertise/exaggerate this issue.
正面:The mass media might appropriately and widely advertise sth.
and lead/encourage sb. to do sth.
```
【万能理由】Ø 关于… 法律法规的执行可能…
Enforcement of laws and regulations about …(主题词) might be …
【适用】正面话题:effective and efficient
有效和高效的负面话题:ineffective and inefficient
无效和低效的
【词汇】执行:法律法规:
Ø 社会缺少关注导致…A lack of attention (paid to …) leads to …
【词汇】缺少:导致:
Ø 个人没有…的意识导致… A lack of the consciousness of … results in …
【词汇】
意识:Ø 媒体:广告宣传负面:The mass media might inappropriately
or irrationally advertise/exaggerate this issue.
正面:The mass media might appropriately and widely advertise sth.
and lead/encourage sb. to do sth.
```
③ 如果我们继续视而不见的话,上述问题会产生一系列后果。
The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe
consequences, if we keep turning a blind eye to it.
The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe
consequences, if we keep turning a blind eye to it.
中立观点
事实上,这幅有着双重意义的漫画提出了一个有争议的问题:这种现象是福还是祸?仁
者见仁智者见智。
In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: is this
phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.
者见仁智者见智。
In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: is this
phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.
这一现象大家一直有争论。诚然,一部人可能认为…. 然而,其他的人都不同
意这一观点。他们得理由是:第一, … 。 第二, … 。 比如说…
this issue(whether …or not ) has long been a matter of debate.
Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … to some extent.
Yet, a majority of people hold the other side of this picture.
For one thing, … . For another, … . For instance, …
意这一观点。他们得理由是:第一, … 。 第二, … 。 比如说…
this issue(whether …or not ) has long been a matter of debate.
Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … to some extent.
Yet, a majority of people hold the other side of this picture.
For one thing, … . For another, … . For instance, …
如果没有这个事情的话,我们可能无法感受到生活的幸福。// 然而,如果这个事情消极
的影响继续发生的话,我们可能要付出昂贵的代价。
Were there no such thing, never could we feel the happiness of life. Yet, were
the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
的影响继续发生的话,我们可能要付出昂贵的代价。
Were there no such thing, never could we feel the happiness of life. Yet, were
the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
个人语料库
名词库
环境保护类
环境保护
提高 环保意识
enhance environmental awareness
enhance environmental awareness
保持生态平衡
keep ecological balance
keep ecological balance
生态系统
ecosystem
ecosystem
自然保护区
nature reserve
nature reserve
可持续发展战略
sustainable development strategy
sustainable development strategy
宜人的居住环境
pleasant living environment
pleasant living environment
节能减排
节能
save energy
save energy
减排
reduce the emission of greehourse gases
reduce the emission of greehourse gases
降低资源消耗率
slow down the rate of resource degradation
slow down the rate of resource degradation
环保产品
environment-friendly products
environment-friendly products
全球变暖
global warming
global warming
低碳经济
low carbon economy
low carbon economy
清洁可再生能源
clean renewable energy
clean renewable energy
核能
nuclear energy
nuclear energy
太阳能
solar energy
solar energy
大功率电气
high-power electrical appliance
high-power electrical appliance
二氧化碳
carbon dioxide
carbon dioxide
气候变化
climate change
climate change
环境恶化
环境恶化
environmental deterioration
environmental deterioration
乱砍滥伐
deforestation
deforestation
过度开发
overexploitation
overexploitation
水土流失
water and soil erosion
water and soil erosion
沙漠化
desertification
desertification
人口增长
population growth
population growth
野生动物保护
wildlife protection
wildlife protection
濒危物种
endangered species
endangered species
野生物种
wild species
wild species
商业捕鱼
commercial fishing
commercial fishing
过度捕捞
overfishing
overfishing
过度开发
reckless exploitation
reckless exploitation
环境污染
白色污染
white pollution
white pollution
限制使用一次性塑料袋
limit the use disposable plastic bags
limit the use disposable plastic bags
可降解一次性塑料袋
throwaway bio-degradable plastic bags
throwaway bio-degradable plastic bags
一次性筷子
disposabel chopsticks
disposabel chopsticks
乱扔垃圾
litter
litter
垃圾分类
garbage classification
garbage classification
丢弃
discard
discard
垃圾
trash, garbage
trash, garbage
工业废弃物
industrial waste
industrial waste
综合利用
multipurpose use
multipurpose use
污水处理
sewage treatment
sewage treatment
水资源保护区
water resource conservation zone
water resource conservation zone
自然灾害
自然灾害
natural disasters
natural disasters
大灾难
catastrophe
catastrophe
沙尘暴
sandstorm
sandstorm
沙丘
sand dune
sand dune
旱灾
drought
drought
水灾
flood
flood
雪灾
snowstorm
snowstorm
空气污染
空气污染浓度
air pollution concentration
air pollution concentration
汽车尾气排放
motor vehicle exhaust
motor vehicle exhaust
尾气净化器
exhaust purifier
exhaust purifier
无铅汽油
lead-free gasoline
lead-free gasoline
燃气车
gas-fueled vehicles
gas-fueled vehicles
电动汽车
cell-driven vehicles
cell-driven vehicles
samll-engine vehicles
工业粉尘排放
industrial dust discharge
industrial dust discharge
烟尘排放
soot emissions
soot emissions
化石燃料
fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas)
fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas)
教育文化类
学位
学士
bachelor's degree
bachelor's degree
硕士
master's degree
master's degree
文学硕士
Master of Arts
Master of Arts
理学硕士
Master of Science
Master of Science
工商管理硕士 MBA
Master of Business Administration
Master of Business Administration
工程硕士 ME
Master of Engineering
Master of Engineering
博士
doctor's degree
doctor's degree
获得学位
acquire degree
acquire degree
文科
arts
arts
理科
science
science
学校
幼儿园
kindergarten
kindergarten
小学
primary school
primary school
中学
middle school
middle school
综合性大学
university
university
学院
college
college
系
department
department
专业
major
major
大学毕业生
university graduates
university graduates
商学院
business school
business school
研究生院
graduate school
graduate school
全体教师
faculty
faculty
教授
professor
professor
食堂
dining hall
dining hall
宿舍
dormitory
dormitory
教学设施
teaching facilities
teaching facilities
选修课
optional course
optional course
必修课
compulsory course
compulsory course
学杂费
tuition fees and other expenses
tuition fees and other expenses
教育
教育类别
终身教育
life-long education
life-long education
素质教育
education for all-round development
education for all-round development
义务教育
compulsory education
compulsory education
应式教育
exam-oriented education
exam-oriented education
成人教育
adult education
adult education
学生相关
逃课
skip classes
skip classes
学习氛围
academic atmosphere
academic atmosphere
开阔眼界
broaden one's horizon
broaden one's horizon
激发兴趣
stimulate one's interest
stimulate one's interest
开发潜能
tap one's potential
tap one's potential
减负
reduce study load
reduce study load
知识信息
知识爆炸
era of knowledge explosion
era of knowledge explosion
理论知识
theoretical knowledge
theoretical knowledge
实践技能
practical skills
practical skills
信息时代
information era
information era
招生就业
招生
recruitment
recruitment
录取
enrollment
enrollment
申请入学
apply for admission to/into
apply for admission to/into
高考
College Entrance Examination
College Entrance Examination
就业市场
job market
job market
雇主
employer
employer
雇员
employee
employee
职业培训
vocational training
vocational training
文化
传统
文化交流
cultural exchanges
cultural exchanges
文化融合
cultural blending/intergration
cultural blending/intergration
传统中国文化
traditional Chinese culture
traditional Chinese culture
儒家
Confucianism
Confucianism
佛家
Buddhism
Buddhism
道家
Daoism
Daoism
京剧
Peking Opera
Peking Opera
中国书法
Chinese calligraphy
Chinese calligraphy
西方文化
western cultures
western cultures
启蒙运动
Enlightenment
Enlightenment
人本主义
humanism
humanism
后现代主义
post-modernism
post-modernism
多元文化
multi-cultures
multi-cultures
文化多元化
cultural diversity
cultural diversity
保存珍惜
preserve and cherish
preserve and cherish
取其精华,去其糟粕
absorb its essence and resist its dark side
absorb its essence and resist its dark side
积极促进文化发展
promote cultural development positively
promote cultural development positively
辉煌灿烂文化遗产
splendid and glorious cultural heritage
splendid and glorious cultural heritage
与时俱进
keep pace with times
keep pace with times
跨文化交流
cross-cultural communication
cross-cultural communication
文化差异
cultural differences
cultural differences
精神文明
spiritual civilization
spiritual civilization
流行
流行文化
popular culture
popular culture
电视广告泛滥
the pervasive advertisements on TV
the pervasive advertisements on TV
偶像崇拜
idol worship
idol worship
上网成瘾
web addiction
web addiction
虚拟生活
virtual life
virtual life
网络谣言
online gossip
online gossip
网络监管
the Internet supervision
the Internet supervision
网络暴力
the Internet violence
the Internet violence
不负责言论
irresponsible remarks
irresponsible remarks
数码产品
digital products
digital products
垃圾短信
junk message
junk message
人生哲理
独立
自立
self-dependence
self-dependence
溺爱
spoil
spoil
独生子女
only child
only child
激烈竞争
fierce competition
fierce competition
啃老族
NEET
NEET
不劳而获
reap without sowing
reap without sowing
坚持
不断努力
make constant efforts
make constant efforts
决不放弃
never give up
never give up
绝不停止进步
never stop making progress
never stop making progress
勤奋
diligence
diligence
人生观
outlook of life
outlook of life
世界观
world outlook
world outlook
谨慎
prudence
prudence
信心
自信
self-confidence
self-confidence
谦虚
modesty
modesty
缺乏自信
lack of confidence
lack of confidence
高估困难
exaggerate diffculties
exaggerate diffculties
低估能力
underestimate one's abilities
underestimate one's abilities
合作
团队合作
teamwork
teamwork
团队精神
team spirit
team spirit
与他人合作
cooperate with others
cooperate with others
态度
保持乐观
keep optimistic
keep optimistic
悲观
pessimism
pessimism
悲观的
be pessimistic
be pessimistic
积极态度
positive attitude
positive attitude
仁慈
benevolence
benevolence
方位词
序数词
基变序,有规律,后面th加上去
four → fourth
six → sixth
six → sixth
一二三,特殊记,后面字母st, nd, rd
八去t,九去e。整数中的y要变成ie
eight → eighth
nine → ninth
twenty → twentieth
nine → ninth
twenty → twentieth
f 来把ve替
five→ fifth
twelve→ twelfth
twelve→ twelfth
若是遇到几十几,只变个位就可以
twenty-one → twenty-first
序数词前要加the 我们一定要牢记
短语库
not only A but also B
in addtion to A, xx (do) B
图画作文写作技巧
流程
审题 2-3min
题目要求
如果有 "entitled XXX" 明确题目要求
则照抄即可,不要画蛇添足
如果有 "entitled XXX" 明确题目要求
则照抄即可,不要画蛇添足
段落结构 【根据题目要求/否则使用九宫格】
a. describe the picture
b. interpret the meaning
c. give your comments
a. describe the picture
b. interpret the meaning
c. give your comments
特殊要求/陷阱
- 论证方式
examples 【举例论证】/ reasons 【理由论证】
- 论据数量
give a specific example
- 论证方式
examples 【举例论证】/ reasons 【理由论证】
- 论据数量
give a specific example
读图
文字说明
图画描述公式:
地点(介词)+ 动作(谓)+核心事物(主),
doing sth. and doing sth. , with + 细节 (环境部件1)
图画描述公式:
地点(介词)+ 动作(谓)+核心事物(主),
doing sth. and doing sth. , with + 细节 (环境部件1)
例如:【倒装描述】
In front of the computer desk sits a college students,
choosing courses, with a computer on the desk
In front of the computer desk sits a college students,
choosing courses, with a computer on the desk
图中的文字可以不用翻译,但必须写出主题词内容
草稿
主题判断
a) 正面
b) 中立;例:高科技(双面性)
c) 负面;例:(2007) 缺乏自信;(2015) 过渡依赖手机
a) 正面
b) 中立;例:高科技(双面性)
c) 负面;例:(2007) 缺乏自信;(2015) 过渡依赖手机
主题词和主题句
a) 主题词表达; 词性,改编
A 的 意义, the meaning of A
A 和 B的关系, the relationship between A and B
a) 主题词表达; 词性,改编
A 的 意义, the meaning of A
A 和 B的关系, the relationship between A and B
内容
三段式+九宫格
三段式+九宫格
亮点
特殊句式
特殊句式
写作
时态
时态:一般现在时
注意:三单和特殊情况
过去式:已故或者过去说的话
将来时:憧憬未来的句子
时态:一般现在时
注意:三单和特殊情况
过去式:已故或者过去说的话
将来时:憧憬未来的句子
检查
注意位置 1/4/7【九宫格位置】
常见错误:三单,名词复数,单词拼写
常见错误:三单,名词复数,单词拼写
复杂句式(高分作文)
倒装句
图画描述
1 a girl 2 stands 3 in the sunshine
倒装:状语 3 + 谓语 2+ 主语 1
In the sunshine stands a girl
倒装:状语 3 + 谓语 2+ 主语 1
In the sunshine stands a girl
憧憬未来
只有这些措施才能
Only with these measures taken can we do sth.
Only with these measures taken can we do sth.
意义强调句
如果没有 sth. , 则无法做某事 (+)
were there no such thing, never could we do sth. 【双倒装】
例句:如果没有爱,我们无法体会幸福
were there no love, never could we taste happiness
were there no such thing, never could we do sth. 【双倒装】
例句:如果没有爱,我们无法体会幸福
were there no love, never could we taste happiness
然而,如果其负面(-)继续恶化,我们需要付出沉重代价
yet, were the opposite facet of this situation to continue,
we would pay a heavy price.
yet, were the opposite facet of this situation to continue,
we would pay a heavy price.
两种语序
自然语序
倒装语序
部分倒装
1.表示强调
倒装句最突出、最常见的修辞效果就是强调,其表现形式如下:
1.only +状语或状语从句置于句首,被该状语修饰的句子用部分倒装。
例子:
Only in this way can you solve this problem.
只有用这种方法,你才可以解决这个问题。
Only after he had spoken out the word did he realize he had made a big mistake.
只有当他已经说出那个字后才意识到自己犯了个大错误。
倒装句最突出、最常见的修辞效果就是强调,其表现形式如下:
1.only +状语或状语从句置于句首,被该状语修饰的句子用部分倒装。
例子:
Only in this way can you solve this problem.
只有用这种方法,你才可以解决这个问题。
Only after he had spoken out the word did he realize he had made a big mistake.
只有当他已经说出那个字后才意识到自己犯了个大错误。
2. hardly,in no way,little,scarcely,seldom,never,no more,no longer,not,not only,
no sooner,not only … (but also),not until… 等具有否定意义的词或词组位于句首,句子用部分倒装。
例子:
No sooner had I got home than it began to rain.
我刚到家就下起了雨。
Seldom do I go to work by bus.
我很少乘公共汽车上班。
Not until twelve o'clock did she go to bed last night .
她昨晚十二点才上床睡觉。
no sooner,not only … (but also),not until… 等具有否定意义的词或词组位于句首,句子用部分倒装。
例子:
No sooner had I got home than it began to rain.
我刚到家就下起了雨。
Seldom do I go to work by bus.
我很少乘公共汽车上班。
Not until twelve o'clock did she go to bed last night .
她昨晚十二点才上床睡觉。
3. so / such...that结构中的so或such位于句首可以构成部分倒装句,表示强调so /such和that之间的部分。
例子:
So unreasonable was his price that everybody startled.
他的要价太离谱,令每个人都瞠目结舌。
To such length did she go in rehearsal that the two actors walked out.
她的彩排进行得那么长,以致于那两个演员都走出去了。
以上各例都用倒装语序突出了句首成分,其语气较自然语序强烈,因而具有极佳的修辞效果
例子:
So unreasonable was his price that everybody startled.
他的要价太离谱,令每个人都瞠目结舌。
To such length did she go in rehearsal that the two actors walked out.
她的彩排进行得那么长,以致于那两个演员都走出去了。
以上各例都用倒装语序突出了句首成分,其语气较自然语序强烈,因而具有极佳的修辞效果
完全倒装
①谓语+主语+……
There be(的各种形式)+主语(+地点或时间状语)
例子:
There was a drop in the temperature.温度下降了
There are birds singing in the tree.鸟儿在树上唱歌。
②副词小品词+谓语动词+名词主语+……
例子:
Out rushed a young lady.
一位年轻女士冲了出去。
③过去分词或现在分词+be的各种形式+主语+……
例子:
Scattered on the floor were several books and magazines.几本书和杂志散落在地板上
①谓语+主语+……
There be(的各种形式)+主语(+地点或时间状语)
例子:
There was a drop in the temperature.温度下降了
There are birds singing in the tree.鸟儿在树上唱歌。
②副词小品词+谓语动词+名词主语+……
例子:
Out rushed a young lady.
一位年轻女士冲了出去。
③过去分词或现在分词+be的各种形式+主语+……
例子:
Scattered on the floor were several books and magazines.几本书和杂志散落在地板上
4.here、there、now、then、thus等副词开头的句子可构成完全倒装。
条件是谓语动词是不及物动词,如arise、be、come、exist、go、follow等。
需要注意的是,当主语是代词时,不能构成倒装。(方位词在句首,主语是名词,全部倒装)
例子:
Here comes our headmaster。我们的校长来了。
Here it is. 在这里。
Here is your key.这是你的钥匙
条件是谓语动词是不及物动词,如arise、be、come、exist、go、follow等。
需要注意的是,当主语是代词时,不能构成倒装。(方位词在句首,主语是名词,全部倒装)
例子:
Here comes our headmaster。我们的校长来了。
Here it is. 在这里。
Here is your key.这是你的钥匙
虚拟语气
归纳总结句(-) 情况如此危机,是时候采取解决...的问题了
The situation being so serious , it is high time that
we took effective and efficient measures to solve the problem of ...
The situation being so serious , it is high time that
we took effective and efficient measures to solve the problem of ...
when+时状
主语一致性原则:
前后主语一致时,省略 when 之后的主语
前后主语一致时,省略 when 之后的主语
比较级与否定式
九宫格
(一) 话题引起
1. 越来越多的人意识到...
There is a growing national awareness of ...
【演练】2020. 越来越多的人意识到了好习惯的重要性。
There is a growing national awareness of ...
【演练】2020. 越来越多的人意识到了好习惯的重要性。
2. 中国正在面临非常严重的….问题。
In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of … more
serious/ delightful. (主题词)
【演练】2015. 据说,大城市的年轻人“手机依赖症”问题最严重
In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of … more
serious/ delightful. (主题词)
【演练】2015. 据说,大城市的年轻人“手机依赖症”问题最严重
3. 过去的数年见证了一个社会现象:….
The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that …
【演练】2013. 过去的数年见证了一个社会现象:越来越多的毕业生涌入就业市场
The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that …
【演练】2013. 过去的数年见证了一个社会现象:越来越多的毕业生涌入就业市场
4. 近来,... 常常登上报纸头条,这引发公众激烈讨论。
Recently, it often hits the headlines of newspapers that an increasing/decreasing number of
people are doing sth., which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.
【演练】2011. 近来,越来越多的游客在景点乱扔垃圾破坏环境,这种现象的报道常常出现
在报纸的头版头条上,引发公众激烈的讨论
Recently, it often hits the headlines of newspapers that an increasing/decreasing number of
people are doing sth., which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.
【演练】2011. 近来,越来越多的游客在景点乱扔垃圾破坏环境,这种现象的报道常常出现
在报纸的头版头条上,引发公众激烈的讨论
5. 在中国几乎无人不知无人不晓这一现象:... 【双否】
Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon that …
Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon that …
6. 近来,在公众中有一个关于......的热门话题。
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning
(二)图画描述
= 如图所示 ,基本公式
= 如图所示 ,基本公式
如图所示
As is (vividly) shown in the (ridiculous) cartoon,
It is shown in the picture that …
As is (vividly) shown in the (ridiculous) cartoon,
It is shown in the picture that …
基本公式
地点+动作+核心事物,doing sth. +
地点+动作+核心事物,doing sth. +
with +次要事物(n.)
with + n. +介词结构(表位置)
with + n. + doing (表主动)
with +n. + V-ed (表被动
with + n. +介词结构(表位置)
with + n. + doing (表主动)
with +n. + V-ed (表被动
两幅图
公式:图一描述。关联词,图二描述。
公式:图一描述。关联词,图二描述。
两图关系:
通用:meanwhile, 30 years later/ago ,
相同:Similarly, likewise, furthermore, moreover, what’s more, even
worse, more importantly,
相反:but, however, yet, on the contrary, by contrast, ironically,
regrettably, unfortunately,
通用:meanwhile, 30 years later/ago ,
相同:Similarly, likewise, furthermore, moreover, what’s more, even
worse, more importantly,
相反:but, however, yet, on the contrary, by contrast, ironically,
regrettably, unfortunately,
【演练】2017 年:
如图所示,在书架前坐着一个慵懒的年轻人,炫耀自己大量的藏书。然而,在书桌前坐着另
一个男人,设定了一年的目标并且立即行动
如图所示,在书架前坐着一个慵懒的年轻人,炫耀自己大量的藏书。然而,在书桌前坐着另
一个男人,设定了一年的目标并且立即行动
图中文字说明
直译:文字说明显示,… . The caption reads, “…”.
意译:我们了解到… We are informed that …
文字说明揭示了… The caption indicates : …
题目:(副)标题揭示了 … The title/subtitle indicates, …
意译:我们了解到… We are informed that …
文字说明揭示了… The caption indicates : …
题目:(副)标题揭示了 … The title/subtitle indicates, …
(三)图画总结
1. 尽管图画简单,但其寓意深刻。
Simple as the picture is , the symbolic meaning is as deep as the ocean.
Simple as the picture is , the symbolic meaning is as deep as the ocean.
2. 这个暗示不仅信息丰富,而且具有教育意义。
The implication is not only informative, but instructive as well.
The implication is not only informative, but instructive as well.
3. 这幅画所描述的似乎有一些夸张,这已经引起了社会的广泛关注
What is depicted in the picture seems exaggerated, which has attracted
extensive attention of the society.
What is depicted in the picture seems exaggerated, which has attracted
extensive attention of the society.
4. 但是,这真是作者想要告诉我们的吗?当然不是了。
But is this what the author tries to tell us? Certainly not.
But is this what the author tries to tell us? Certainly not.
(四)具体意义
1. 毫无疑问,这位画家的目的是要告诉我们应该充分重视…
Undoubtedly, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has
to be paid to … (主题名词或词组)
Undoubtedly, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has
to be paid to … (主题名词或词组)
2. 显然,这个图画象征性地揭示了日常生活一个现象:…
Apparently, the drawing symbolically reveals a social phenomenon in our daily
life
Apparently, the drawing symbolically reveals a social phenomenon in our daily
life
这幅图画阐释了…(主题词)的真正含义,通过强调事实:… (主题词)是一种情感力
量,这能够支撑我们,无论周围世界如何艰难。
This picture illustrates the true meaning of …(主题词), by stressing the fact
that …(主题词) is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how hard
the world around us becomes.
量,这能够支撑我们,无论周围世界如何艰难。
This picture illustrates the true meaning of …(主题词), by stressing the fact
that …(主题词) is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how hard
the world around us becomes.
4. 画家想告诉我们什么呢?事实上,作者想告诉我们一个非常明显的事…(主题词) 对一个
人的成功而言极其有害。
What can we deduce from this picture? Actually, the author strives to send out
an abundantly clear message that … is of extreme detriment to one’s success.
人的成功而言极其有害。
What can we deduce from this picture? Actually, the author strives to send out
an abundantly clear message that … is of extreme detriment to one’s success.
5. 不言而喻, 图画的象征含义是......, 这已经超越了图画本身,
It goes without saying that its symbolic message that ... has gone beyond the picture
itself.
It goes without saying that its symbolic message that ... has gone beyond the picture
itself.
(五)意义论证
第一种:举例调查
= 引出例子 + 例子本身
+ 例子总结 + 科学调查
= 引出例子 + 例子本身
+ 例子总结 + 科学调查
1. 引出例子:
除了下面这个,我找不到更好的例子来证明了。
I can think of no better examples than the following one(s).
I can think of no better examples than the following one(s).
我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多,而下面这个是最有说服力的。
Our human history has been filled with a wide variety of examples of this topic,
with the following one being the foremost.
Our human history has been filled with a wide variety of examples of this topic,
with the following one being the foremost.
在我所听到的,看到的,经历过的所有与这个话题相关的例子中,最令人印象深刻的是…
Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed,
experienced, the most impressive one is …(例子名字).
Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed,
experienced, the most impressive one is …(例子名字).
大量的例证可以证明,而下面这个足够了。
Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.
Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.
2. 例子本身:
某人, 因在…方面的成功而著名,经常被人们记住她的…, 这在其一生都散发着光辉。
______________( 人 名 ) , honored for his/ her success in _____________, is always
remembered for his/ her ____________, which shines through every chapter/page of
his/her life.
______________( 人 名 ) , honored for his/ her success in _____________, is always
remembered for his/ her ____________, which shines through every chapter/page of
his/her life.
某人,一个......, 就是最好的例证。他在过去做了..., 这展示了他的... 的能力。
....(人名), a ..., is a perfect example. He did ... in the past, which shows his ...(能力
和特长
....(人名), a ..., is a perfect example. He did ... in the past, which shows his ...(能力
和特长
3.例子总结:
【可忽略】
【可忽略】
…的例子告诉我们一个故事:…
The case of sth. teaches us that …
The experience of sb. teaches us that …
The case of sth. teaches us that …
The experience of sb. teaches us that …
这只是我遇到过的所有案例中的一个, 类似的故事每天都在上演。
It is one of many examples I have heard (read / encountered) . Similar stories
happen every day.
It is one of many examples I have heard (read / encountered) . Similar stories
happen every day.
4. 科学调查:
根据最近一个权威机构的调查表明, ...
According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, ...
almost …% of the people might hold the same view.
almost …% of the people might hold the same view that ...
almost …% of the people might do similarly in the same situation.
almost …% of the people might do sth..
According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, ...
almost …% of the people might hold the same view.
almost …% of the people might hold the same view that ...
almost …% of the people might do similarly in the same situation.
almost …% of the people might do sth..
最近一项调查可以支持我的观点。这项由......进行的调查,在调查了......(某人)之后,
发现大部分受访者宣称...... 。
A recent survey can back up my point. The survey conducted by ... after polling ...
has found that a significant percentage of respondents claimed that ... (调查结论)
发现大部分受访者宣称...... 。
A recent survey can back up my point. The survey conducted by ... after polling ...
has found that a significant percentage of respondents claimed that ... (调查结论)
第二种:原因后果
= 引出原因+具体原因
+引出结果+具体结果
= 引出原因+具体原因
+引出结果+具体结果
引出原因
① 除了以下几点,我找不到更好的理由了。第一,… 。 第二, … 。
I can think of no better reasons than the following ones. Firstly, … , Secondly, … .
I can think of no better reasons than the following ones. Firstly, … , Secondly, … .
② 到底是什么产生了这个问题?这是个发人深思的问题。第一,…。 第二, ...。
What exactly account for (主题词)? It is a thought-provoking
question. To begin with, … . In addition, … .
What exactly account for (主题词)? It is a thought-provoking
question. To begin with, … . In addition, … .
③ 考虑到这个问题的重要性(或严重性),有必要指出其背后的原因。
Considering the significance(+) /seriousness (-) / popularity of the present situation,
we ought to point out the causes behind it.
Considering the significance(+) /seriousness (-) / popularity of the present situation,
we ought to point out the causes behind it.
④ 你可能会思考,为什么这个现象会发生呢?
Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon emerge ?
Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon emerge ?
具体原因
① To begin with, ... might exert great influence on it.
② Firstly, ... might cause the problem. Secondly,... . The last but not least , ..
③ Primarily, the reason for (主题) is that(原因)
② Firstly, ... might cause the problem. Secondly,... . The last but not least , ..
③ Primarily, the reason for (主题) is that(原因)
引出结果
① 因此,
So…
As a result / consequence, …
Consequently, …
So…
As a result / consequence, …
Consequently, …
② 似乎不止一个直接或间接的影响与… (主题词) 相关,这些我们无法忽视。 第一,… .
第二, … .
There seem to be more than one direct or indirect effects involved in … , which
none of us can fail to notice. Firstly, … . Secondly, …
第二, … .
There seem to be more than one direct or indirect effects involved in … , which
none of us can fail to notice. Firstly, … . Secondly, …
③ 如果我们继续视而不见的话,上述问题会产生一系列后果。
The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe
consequences, if we keep turning a blind eye to it.
The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe
consequences, if we keep turning a blind eye to it.
具体结果
方法一:重复问题或加重问题
方法二:举例 For instance, For example, such as …
方法二:举例 For instance, For example, such as …
① For example, ...
② As a result, an increasing number of people have come to realize the fact
mentioned above.
③ The problem/situation/case mentioned above has come into being, which might
become worse/better in the future.
② As a result, an increasing number of people have come to realize the fact
mentioned above.
③ The problem/situation/case mentioned above has come into being, which might
become worse/better in the future.
第三种:对立观点分析
引出争议 +
正方观点+理由和例子
反方观点+理由和例子
引出争议 +
正方观点+理由和例子
反方观点+理由和例子
引出争议
① 当谈及..., 仁者见仁智者见智。
When it comes to ..., views vary from person to person.
② 历史上,人们对于....... 的现象从未像今天这样讨论得这么激烈。
Never before in history has the phenomenon of ... been talked so much as nowadays.
③ 事实上,这幅有着双重意义的漫画提出了一个有争议的问题:这种现象是福还是祸?仁
者见仁智者见智。
In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: is this
phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.
④ 关于是否..... 的问题,每个人观点不同。
Concerning the issue of whether ... , people’s views vary from person to person
When it comes to ..., views vary from person to person.
② 历史上,人们对于....... 的现象从未像今天这样讨论得这么激烈。
Never before in history has the phenomenon of ... been talked so much as nowadays.
③ 事实上,这幅有着双重意义的漫画提出了一个有争议的问题:这种现象是福还是祸?仁
者见仁智者见智。
In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: is this
phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.
④ 关于是否..... 的问题,每个人观点不同。
Concerning the issue of whether ... , people’s views vary from person to person
正方观点理由
For one thing, some people might hold the view that ...
What’s more, they also claim that ...
For example, ...
What’s more, they also claim that ...
For example, ...
反方观点理由
For another, the rest might hold the other side of this picture. ( hold the opposite
view. )
Furthermore, they also argue that ...
For instance, ...
view. )
Furthermore, they also argue that ...
For instance, ...
事实上,这一现象大家一直有争论。诚然,一部人可能认为…. 然而,其他的人都不同
意这一观点。他们得理由是:第一, … 。 第二, … 。 比如说…
In fact, this issue(whether …or not ) has long been a matter of debate.
Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … to some extent.
Yet, a majority of people hold the other side of this picture.
For one thing, … . For another, … . For instance, …
意这一观点。他们得理由是:第一, … 。 第二, … 。 比如说…
In fact, this issue(whether …or not ) has long been a matter of debate.
Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … to some extent.
Yet, a majority of people hold the other side of this picture.
For one thing, … . For another, … . For instance, …
(六)意义总结
子非鱼,安知鱼之乐?
How can you, not being a fish yourself, know the happiness of a fish
How can you, not being a fish yourself, know the happiness of a fish
如果没有这个事情的话,我们可能无法感受到生活的幸福。// 然而,如果这个事情消极
的影响继续发生的话,我们可能要付出昂贵的代价。
Were there no such thing, never could we feel the happiness of life. Yet, were
the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
的影响继续发生的话,我们可能要付出昂贵的代价。
Were there no such thing, never could we feel the happiness of life. Yet, were
the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a high price.
要不是某事或某种精神,某些人又怎么可能实现最终的目标呢?
Without something / this spirit, how could it be possible for somebody to
achieve the ultimate goal?
Without something / this spirit, how could it be possible for somebody to
achieve the ultimate goal?
(七)归纳总结
1. 考虑到这个(正面 / 负面)话题的方方面面,我们应该牢记: …。(主题句)
Considering every aspect of this positive / negative phenomenon, we should
bear in mind that …
Considering every aspect of this positive / negative phenomenon, we should
bear in mind that …
2. 情况如此危急,解决这个问题刻不容缓。
The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took measures to solve
the problem.
3. 就…而言,如果不小心或者没有节制,… (主题词) 可能会成为一把双刃剑。
In terms of …, if used carelessly or without restraint, … could prove to be a
double-edged sword.
4. 为了…, 在我看来,需要所有的努力。
To …, in my eyes, it calls for the efforts from all sides
To …, in my eyes, it calls for the efforts from all sides
(八)建议措施
1. 统一做法:扬长避短
① 因此,我们应该取其精华,去其糟粕。
Therefore, we should take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
② 因此,正如常言道,我们应该吸取精华,忽略缺点。
We should, therefore, as the common saying goes, “ absorb the essence and
neglect the drawbacks”.
① 因此,我们应该取其精华,去其糟粕。
Therefore, we should take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
② 因此,正如常言道,我们应该吸取精华,忽略缺点。
We should, therefore, as the common saying goes, “ absorb the essence and
neglect the drawbacks”.
2. 不同主体不同做法: 固定主体 + to do something
【适用】正面话题、中立话题、负面话题
【适用】正面话题、中立话题、负面话题
Ø 媒体宣传
① The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, should make
every effort to propagate and advocate i
① The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, should make
every effort to propagate and advocate i
Ø 政府立法
① 制定法律:It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked
out and enforced to do sth..
② 教育公民:The government has the responsibility to
educate/encourage every citizen to do sth.
① 制定法律:It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked
out and enforced to do sth..
② 教育公民:The government has the responsibility to
educate/encourage every citizen to do sth.
公民意识
① 社会公众提高…的意识。
The public should enhance the consciousness of …
② 我们应该采取实际行动做某事。
We ourselves ought to take practical actions to do sth..
③ ... 的培养有赖于社会每个成员的积极参与。
The cultivation of ... depends on the active participation of every citizen of
our society.
① 社会公众提高…的意识。
The public should enhance the consciousness of …
② 我们应该采取实际行动做某事。
We ourselves ought to take practical actions to do sth..
③ ... 的培养有赖于社会每个成员的积极参与。
The cultivation of ... depends on the active participation of every citizen of
our society.
(九)憧憬未来
1. 如果所有措施付诸实现,前途一片光明。
If all the solutions are turned into reality, the prospect will become more
desirable.
If all the solutions are turned into reality, the prospect will become more
desirable.
2. 通过等待和希望,我们一定可以实现最终目标。
Through/ By waiting and hoping, we will be able to achieve our ultimate goal.
Through/ By waiting and hoping, we will be able to achieve our ultimate goal.
3. 伴随着恰当的法律和警觉的民众,问题迟早会被解决。
With appropriate laws and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before
the problem becomes a thing of the past.
With appropriate laws and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before
the problem becomes a thing of the past.
4. 倒装句: Only with these measures taken can we do something.
Only in this way can we do something.
Ø Aexpect a more harmonious society
Ø make dreams come true
Ø make life more meaningful/colorful
Only in this way can we do something.
Ø Aexpect a more harmonious society
Ø make dreams come true
Ø make life more meaningful/colorful
(十)补充:名言警句
【位置:1/7 替换;9后 】
【位置:1/7 替换;9后 】
Ø 谚语警句引出:
1. 众所周知,…
It is (a truth ) universally acknowledged that ...
2. 毫不否认这一事实: …
There is no denying the fact that ...
3. “…”是老生常谈,但是我严重同意它。
“....” is an old cliché, but I agree with it.
4. 人们常常说,“...” 讽刺地是,说的容易做的难。
People often say “...”. Ironically, it is easier said than done.
5. 改编一句名言,”…”
To twist a common saying, “...”
6. 正如孔子说过,”…”
Just as Confucius put it, “ …”
7. 正如一句古老的阿拉伯谚语所言,”…”
Just as an old Arab proverb says, “...”
1. 众所周知,…
It is (a truth ) universally acknowledged that ...
2. 毫不否认这一事实: …
There is no denying the fact that ...
3. “…”是老生常谈,但是我严重同意它。
“....” is an old cliché, but I agree with it.
4. 人们常常说,“...” 讽刺地是,说的容易做的难。
People often say “...”. Ironically, it is easier said than done.
5. 改编一句名言,”…”
To twist a common saying, “...”
6. 正如孔子说过,”…”
Just as Confucius put it, “ …”
7. 正如一句古老的阿拉伯谚语所言,”…”
Just as an old Arab proverb says, “...”
1、教育学习
Confucius said: learning without thinking leads one to perplexity ; thinking without
learning puts one in calamity .
Genius without education is like silver in the mine. ( Benjamin Franklin )
Knowledge is power .
2、工作生活
A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm.
Don’t gild the lily. (William Shakespeare , British dramatist .)
3、科技经济
Experience is the mother of science .
Science and technology constitute the primary productive force .
4、社会环境
Actions speak louder than words .
Don’t judge one book from the cover.
When in Rome , do as the Romans do .
5、道德爱情
A good fame is better than a good face
Friendship is love without his wings .(George Gordon Byron , British poet )
6、理想现实
Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
God helps those who help themselves .
If winter comes, can spring be far behind ? (P.B.Shelley, British poet)
7、人生逆境
Cease to struggle and you cease to live .
No cross , no crown .
It is wise to learn at another man’s cost .
8、娱乐休闲
Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body .
Good health is over wealth .
Health is happiness
Confucius said: learning without thinking leads one to perplexity ; thinking without
learning puts one in calamity .
Genius without education is like silver in the mine. ( Benjamin Franklin )
Knowledge is power .
2、工作生活
A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm.
Don’t gild the lily. (William Shakespeare , British dramatist .)
3、科技经济
Experience is the mother of science .
Science and technology constitute the primary productive force .
4、社会环境
Actions speak louder than words .
Don’t judge one book from the cover.
When in Rome , do as the Romans do .
5、道德爱情
A good fame is better than a good face
Friendship is love without his wings .(George Gordon Byron , British poet )
6、理想现实
Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
God helps those who help themselves .
If winter comes, can spring be far behind ? (P.B.Shelley, British poet)
7、人生逆境
Cease to struggle and you cease to live .
No cross , no crown .
It is wise to learn at another man’s cost .
8、娱乐休闲
Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body .
Good health is over wealth .
Health is happiness
三段法
引言
总体描述
第一段主题句。
角色 + 动作 + 环境【什么人,在哪里,做了什么事情?】
角色 + 服装 + 表情 【肖像类的图画】
角色 + 动作 + 环境【什么人,在哪里,做了什么事情?】
角色 + 服装 + 表情 【肖像类的图画】
【引言】正如图画中所描绘的那样 ... (固定第一句)
1.As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is 【要指出象征内容】
2.As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,
3.As is (vividly) shown in the (ridiculous/) cartoon 【通用】
4.In the pictures/cartoons above are
1.As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is 【要指出象征内容】
2.As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon,
3.As is (vividly) shown in the (ridiculous/) cartoon 【通用】
4.In the pictures/cartoons above are
挖掘细节词,连接成句
分类
can be catogorized as
can be catogorized as
文字说明【首段句末】
图中的文字说明显示
1. We are informed that "..."
2. And below the drawing, there is a caption which says: "..."
3. The caption indicates, "..."
1. We are informed that "..."
2. And below the drawing, there is a caption which says: "..."
3. The caption indicates, "..."
主体
主题句
(人生哲理类) 这些漫画的目的是为了告诉我们 xxx 是最重要的
The aim/purpose of the picture is to illustrate/show us that utmost significance should be attanched to xxx
(社会事件类) 在图画背后或者隐藏于 "具体内容" 显而易见:xxx
What lies behind the picture, or "buried" in the hot pot, is clear:
The aim/purpose of the picture is to illustrate/show us that utmost significance should be attanched to xxx
(社会事件类) 在图画背后或者隐藏于 "具体内容" 显而易见:xxx
What lies behind the picture, or "buried" in the hot pot, is clear:
论证 (论点+论据)
五大角度
背景 (政治、经济、文化、社会)
社会现象
不可否认的是, xxx 比比皆是
There is no denying the fact that ...
There is no denying the fact that ...
正反观点
原因
一方面,另一方面
For one reason, xxx. For another, xxx
For one reason, xxx. For another, xxx
结果
最终可能会面对或者导致 xxx
could be faced with xxx, or end up xxx
could be faced with xxx, or end up xxx
六种手段
因果论证
分类论证
首先:To begin with, xxx.
例如:As an illustration / For instance
齐次:What is more
换言之: In other words
例如:As an illustration / For instance
齐次:What is more
换言之: In other words
定义解释
统计和事实
举例论证
比较与对比
一方面:On the one hand
因此: Consequently
然而:Nevertheless
另一方面: On the other hand
-----
相反:On the contrary
因此: Consequently
然而:Nevertheless
另一方面: On the other hand
-----
相反:On the contrary
小结
This would be unfortunate because ...
总结
真题写作练习
2008 合作 (pos)
词汇积累
王江涛范文
潘赟带练
练习
2009 网络的远与近 (neu)
潘赟带练
王江涛范文
练习
2010 "文化"火锅 (pos)
词汇积累
王江涛范文
潘赟带练
练习
2011 旅程之余 (neg)
潘赟带练
练习
2012 乐观悲观 (pos)
词汇积累
王江涛范文
潘赟带练
练习
总结
2014 相携 (pos)
词汇积累
王江涛范文
潘赟带练
练习
总结
2015 手机时代的聚会 (neg)
词汇积累
王江涛范文
潘赟带练
练习
2019 毅力与坚持不懈 (pos)
潘赟带练
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